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GameCobra Posted: 11/22/2011 1:20:48 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 091
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I'm at the 40K mark now. Don't know why i didn't submit it yet, but i shall do that today.

Followed by me trying to end this by this Thursday. Not likely, but i want this done by the weekend :|
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/22/2011 3:39:27 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 092
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I don't understand why Write or Die has a "disable save" option.
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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/26/2011 9:49:51 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 093
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Word count: 41,666

I didn't do that intentionally, it just happened. But it means that I'm back to being only as behind as I usually am, which is to say, I'm on track except that I do my writing after midnight, so I'm always technically a day behind. But if I keep up my 2,200ish words per day streak that I've been doing, I think I should be okay.

Maybe.

Probably.

More importantly, my plot is in shambles and I have no idea how to make it recover. Should I attempt to publish this at some future point, this part of the story will not need to be rewritten. No, rewriting is not extreme enough. Rewriting implies that even the basic structure that is there now will remain. No, a tune-up will not be sufficient here, nor will buying new parts.

The car must be scrapped, and a new one of a different make and model, purchased.
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/26/2011 1:58:19 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 094
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Even if your story was entirely coherent, editors are likely to want you to kill large chunks of it. The author has a much different perspective on what needs to go into a story than the editor does, and almost all of the time you are likely to get attached to plot points that aren't entirely necessary or even particularly good. So, I wouldn't be too concerned about the whole of your plot so long as some segment of it makes sense and your divergence from that doesn't prevent you from continuing down a sane path in the future.
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GameCobra Posted: 11/26/2011 3:03:15 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 095
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If the story feels in shambles, then a rewrite maybe a possible choice.

I should be able to finish at 50K today. Most of mmy original story is still there, but i had to sacrifice about %10 of it to make it to the 50K mark. At least i'll be satisfied to review it someday when i'm totally bored of videogames someday.
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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/27/2011 9:56:02 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 096
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So, I wouldn't be too concerned about the whole of your plot so long as some segment of it makes sense and your divergence from that doesn't prevent you from continuing down a sane path in the future.

Yeah, this is the approach I ended up taking. I bullshitted a thing just to get the plot moving in the correct direction again, while leaving room for me to go back and add stuff there to make it actually... make sense.

Word count: 44,079

A side effect of the above is that the plot can now be resolved sooner.

Like, a lot sooner.

Like, before I was about 10% done with what I wanted to achieve, and now I'm at like 90% because of my bullshitting to get the plot moving again.

this isn't even the entirety of the story. this is just one plot arc.

i'm pretty sure that this story, told the way i want to tell it in full, would be like two million words long.

i'm not even joking
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/27/2011 7:27:29 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 097
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I don't think that's an uncommon phenomenon, though I personally haven't run into that problem myself.
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Epyon Posted: 11/28/2011 1:13:58 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 098
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this isn't even the entirety of the story. this is just one plot arc.

i'm pretty sure that this story, told the way i want to tell it in full, would be like two million words long.


Bleach in novel format?
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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/28/2011 1:45:45 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 099
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at least there's no aizen-equivalent yet

though this is largely because i'm 94 thousand words in and still haven't introduced the first main villain

...

i am a bad writer
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/28/2011 1:50:20 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 100
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Holy shit!
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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/28/2011 2:05:15 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 101
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In... fairness? I guess fairness? It's not supposed to be villain driven or anything.

I'm trying to draw on those adventure novels where the main antagonist was some BS like "the environment" or whatever, and transplant that to a less realistic setting.

The actual named villains are almost incidental.

That said, i am still a bad writer.
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/28/2011 2:31:08 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 102
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Well, it depends on the extent to which the villain partakes in the plot. If it's like the final boss or he's just there for the last (few?) act(s) in the story, then yeah, it makes sense that he hasn't shown up yet, assuming his existence has been hinted at before.
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"The sciences have hitherto harmed us little; but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age." ~ H.P Lovecraft, The Call of Cthulhu
GameCobra Posted: 11/28/2011 2:36:34 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 103
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I finally finished today. God forbid did i enjoy it, but it started to become a chore unfortunately thanks to distractions.

If i ever get to write this book for reals one day, i definitely wanna proof-read it. i enjoyed writing it alot.

As for Villains, I liked my villain when she was behind-the-scenes and ignored and mysterious, but came back with a big surprise in the end, if not somewhat predictable.

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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/28/2011 5:52:27 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 104
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'Grats, GameCobra. What was your final word count?
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Link Dude Posted: 11/28/2011 5:55:38 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 105
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Aizen: When where you under the impression that he even began?

Tsukishima: Of course he wrote it, because I'm the one who helped him write it.
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GameCobra Posted: 11/28/2011 10:56:51 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 106
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50183!

Funny enough, this only worked because i went back and added my prologue. who woulda thunk it.
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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/29/2011 8:15:39 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 107
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Yeah, last year I wrapped up my story a few hundred words under par, so I ended up having to go back and insert some BS dream sequence thing that I'd probably excise completely if I ever try to get this published. (Though it had one or two good ideas I might try to incorporate elsewhere.) In any case, I think it's pretty commendable to wrap up your story at anywhere near 50,000 words - shows that you can plan for length pretty well, IMO.

...Speaking of which, I'm at 49,007 words right now and even the heavily, heavily truncated version of the story I want to tell probably requires another 10,000 words. So that's awesome. At least I'll hit 50k though. >_>
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Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/30/2011 9:00:52 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 108
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yay, finished

Word Count: 50379

...

i still have not introduced my main villain

god
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Link Dude Posted: 11/30/2011 9:04:27 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 109
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Just make it one of your already introduced characters that happens to be an illusionist of some sort.
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/30/2011 5:54:43 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 110
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The main villain is life itself, Kenri
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"The sciences have hitherto harmed us little; but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age." ~ H.P Lovecraft, The Call of Cthulhu
GameCobra Posted: 12/1/2011 12:23:50 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 111
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/facedesk

I forgot to validate it.
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 12/1/2011 4:06:50 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 112
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=(
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GameCobra Posted: 11/2/2012 2:01:58 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 113
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Forgot all about Nanowrimo. I shall not screw up this year.

To make certain of this, i'm writing a horror story with a POV in mind. Like to see where this goes. =3
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"Failure is beneath Doom!" - Dr. Doom, MvC3
Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/2/2012 10:49:24 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 114
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In order to make it authentic, you have to have your main character say

OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT MOTHERFUCK OH SHIT OH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT

every few paragraphs.
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"The sciences have hitherto harmed us little; but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age." ~ H.P Lovecraft, The Call of Cthulhu
GameCobra Posted: 11/2/2012 11:40:01 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 115
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Just like in the movies!

Wait...

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"Failure is beneath Doom!" - Dr. Doom, MvC3
Kenri of the Yuri Posted: 11/3/2012 9:40:37 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 116
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I... may not attempt NaNoWriMo this year.

Any time at school not in classes is spent doing homework and any free time I have at home is at an even bigger premium. >_>
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Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/4/2012 12:28:30 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 117
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I know; school sucks, I should get a job at McDonald's and call it a day.
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"The sciences have hitherto harmed us little; but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age." ~ H.P Lovecraft, The Call of Cthulhu
GameCobra Posted: 11/4/2012 3:11:21 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 118
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Seems anytime i get myself into something i really want, i get distracted by something else. When everything seemed to be going well for me for the contest, the past couple of days i been busy watching the family at home, geting hooked to movies and practically being distracted every turn. barely hit 2000 words. I think I'm going to call it at this point since it feels like a lost cause =\
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"But friends, i ask you. What is a GameCobra? From where does it come? Who are it's people?" - A Random Day on World of Warcraft
"Failure is beneath Doom!" - Dr. Doom, MvC3
Ogordemir99 Posted: 11/4/2012 4:41:28 AM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 119
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Don't give up on the 3rd. You're only 48,000 words away. That's... 1,714 words a day! Easy peasey. I don't know how to spell that.
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~ Ogordemir ~
"The sciences have hitherto harmed us little; but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age." ~ H.P Lovecraft, The Call of Cthulhu
GameCobra Posted: 11/4/2012 3:17:33 PM UTC | Message Detail | Filter | Author Profile | # 120
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I know, but the motivation for me at this rate is sucking horribly.
Going to try to get some motivation again, but that's going to be hard now.
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"But friends, i ask you. What is a GameCobra? From where does it come? Who are it's people?" - A Random Day on World of Warcraft
"Failure is beneath Doom!" - Dr. Doom, MvC3
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